Who's at the Door-Short Story

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  1. Kenza15 September 2014 at 11:30

    I absolutely love this story! It's really interesting and it grips you from the beginning (I mentioned before on Scratch). Talking of stories, you've reached the top of the waiting list in Scratch Story Circle 2 - I just wanted to let you know. :)

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    1. Fatima Salman Siddiqui15 September 2014 at 12:55

      Okay, I'll try to write on as soon as possible. Thanks for letting me know, I haven't been on Scratch for a while.

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    2. Kenza1 December 2014 at 10:03

      Okay. :) I've only been going on Scratch more or less once/twice a week lately.

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    3. Kenza1 December 2014 at 10:05

      Oh! It's an old comment I haven't seen before. Sorry! Of course, I remember you added onto 1/2 recently.

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  2. abiha salman27 November 2014 at 05:51

    fatima baji this is a awosome story and this is me abiha please see my i am giving you my blogs adders please visit my and the adders is. abiha's creations.blogspot.com please please visit it

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