Changes I would like to see in my country five years ahead
Hi readers! Here's another one of those essays that I mentioned I'd be sharing in here. This one was written on 12th April, 2016. The topic is mentioned below. Comments, feedback, and suggestions are very welcome! :)
What
changes would you like to see take place in your country in the next five
years?
Everything has some space for improvement, to strive
to make it better, if not perfect. There are many changes that I would like to
see take place in my homeland for it to improve.
Firstly, I would like to see my country cleaner. The
garbage disposal system of many places in Sindh, especially Karachi, which is
the provincial capital, needs to be regenerated. The bio-degradable waste needs
to be sorted and tackled accordingly, and the recyclable waste recycled. This
change would not only be a relief to the common people, but also improve the
country’s outlook.
Secondly, I would like to see Pakistan greener than it
already is. Although the province of Punjab, and Kashmir are full of natural
greenery due to their rich, fertile soil, many places in the rest of the
country are not so rich with this natural treasure. I would like to see the
rest of the country cultivated and cropped as well. This would be advantageous
to the eco-system, as well as be a bonus to the economy, by providing
additional crops.
It is heart- wrenching to see little children begging
on the streets of our country. Five years later –or earlier- I wish that none
of those children would beg anymore. I would like the children of our country
to be well-educated and respectable people.
Five years later, I would like to see our country’s
economy more stable. The basics, like food, clothing, and shelter, be available
to every person. The prices of necessities should be affordable for the average
man. I would like to see every citizen’s basic rights addressed appropriately.
These changes and improvements, if they take place,
would definitely make our country a better place. They would prove beneficial,
not only for us, but also for the future generations to come.
I love your language style so much!! :D It's nice to see how you've arranged each topic into new paragraphs as an effective presentational device! And I absolutely agree with what you've written in this essay. You're right; there's always, always space for improvement, no matter how good/bad a country. :D It's nice to see that you've injected true facts into this piece too - it really helps to get across the message! The garbage disposal system is definitely a major problem and so are issues with the eco-system. :/ It's sad to hear that little children are still begging on the street! D: I totally agree - it would be so much better if they had the advantage of an education! I'm sure (and hoping!) that these improvements will be made soon in Pakistan! After all, your country is improving gradually isn't it? :D (alas, the UK is going downhill on the other hand! xD) While people have advantages here in the UK though (like free education, no child labour, etc.) we no longer have a beautiful country like you do! (Just housing estates after housing estates and lots of rain and pollution. >.<) So there will always be the advantages/disadvantages I guess! xD This is a wonderful piece of work, Fatima! Keep writing! <3
ReplyDeleteGosh thank you! :D Yeah, the whole system desperately needs improvement. I hope so too. Yes, it is improving gradually, but I believe it needs to speed up! I suppose you're right that there will always be advantages and disadvantages of any place you live in. (Besides, I guess we're never satisfied and happy with whatever we have! :\ )
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Actually the thing is that we are not satisfied with the improvement we have done since last five years. We need to be satisfied with the achievement that we have achieved from the last five years. For example after 5 years if the people of the country gets their basic necessities and all the things mentioned above, gradually after time passes our expectation and greed increase much more.
DeleteSo the point is that we need to look after us and our financial economy.
Fine piece written great job Fatima.
You are right, in a way, that we need to thankful and happy with the resources we have in our country. However, our country, despite being over 70 years since independence, has hardly improved. I think we need to accept and acknowledge the fact that there are plenty of problems that we're facing, so that we can actually start solving them. After all, being patriotic Pakistanis, we do have plenty of hopes and dreams associated with Pakistan, and we'd sure like it to be in a better state.
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Nice article sis ! I agree with you since I'm also from Karachi
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It's really refreshing to hear a teenager dream of a better future for her home country and its people rather than preoccupy herself with the newest Iphone model, masha'Allah. As unlikely as it is that any of these changes will come to fruition within 5 years of your wish, this should not deter us from working for the changes we want to see happen. And, in my opinion, the single most important thing to start with is raising awareness, sharing knowledge and educating ourselves and others about the problems that we identify. Doing our research on what has caused the problems and on possible solutions and putting that information out there can have an immense impact on future actions, insha'Allah.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! Yes, you're are right as it seems very unlikely that these changes will come into being within five years, but that should not stop us from working to get these things in action.
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DeleteMay Allah give you courage and strength to work for society for the sake of His pleasure.
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DeleteThis is amazing, and it's heart melting to see that humanity still lives! :D... You have used spectacular wording and your presentation (the way you have arranged your points) is at the top! I would love to see these changes occur in our country and INSHALLAH one day we'll live in a peaceful homeland.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Yes, despite the sad reality, we still have hopes for better days.
DeleteHi Fatima! Very good essay you have written. I was writing on the same topic you have written right now so I thought I may check how other people have written. My father has recently started a school in Karachi. It's name is "The Lab School". It supports a different point of view from other schools and it's the first of it's kind in Pakistan. I am also a student there and I would appreciate it if you could check up on the school and share it. Do visit if interested. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHere is the link to it's website > http://thelabschool.pk/
Hi Bilal! Thanks for the comment. :)
DeleteI know about The Lab School, I've heard about it from many people. MashaAllah, it is a great initiative. I would definitely love to visit it sometime. :D Thank you!
Hi Fatima,
ReplyDeleteI discovered your blog recently and I must say your writings are very mature of your age mashAllah.
And this time you have picked a topic that is so close to my heart. I really wish that my country shines through and comes out of the difficulties it is facing nowadays.
Best of luck for your writings Fatima, keep the spirit up and stay blessed!
Hi! Thank you very much for the encouraging comment. I actually wrote this essay more than three years ago, so my writings right now are very different from this. But I still hold on to these ideas, and yes, I'm still quite hopeful for our country.
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ReplyDeleteHi Fatima,
I discovered your blog recently and I must say your writings are very mature of your age mashAllah.
And this time you have picked a topic that is so close to my heart. I really wish that my country shines through and comes out of the difficulties it is facing nowadays.
Best of luck for your writings Fatima, keep the spirit up and stay blessed!
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