Short Story~The Storm
Here is a story that I wrote recently on a topic of a past O level paper. Please keep in mind while reading it that this is the third draft of the story. Feedback would be taken seriously and appreciated. An instantaneous splash of water landing on the deck woke up the sailor. He leapt out of bed and hurried up to the deck, hoping that all was well. The situation was worse than he had anticipated. It was raining cats and dogs, accompanied by a very strong gale. The roar of thunder indicated the beginning of a storm. The bottom of the ship was already flooded about six inches deep with water and its level was increasing with the rain. The sailor quickly rang the siren for help and grabbed some buckets. Sleepy-eyed men came out of their cabins to help and he directed them towards the flooded area, where he handed out buckets and yelled out instructions. His voice was barely audible over the heavy rain and thunder, but they seemed to understand. They went to work at once, ...
I've seen this project before and I really like it! :D Just wondering, how did you embed it? I tried embedding a writing project onto my 5 Star Writers blog, but it didn't work. >.<
ReplyDeleteWhen you create a new post, on the left hand corner, there's a button which says Compose | HTML Click on HTML, then copy and paste the embed code of your Scratch project (you'll have to sign in to Scratch to do that). After pasting the embed code, on the right side of the page of your post, there's a column which says 'Labels', 'Schedule', 'Permalink', 'Location', and 'Options'.
DeleteClick on 'Options'. This kind of thing will open:
Reader comments
Allow
Don't allow
Compose mode
Show HTML literally
Interpret typed HTML
Line breaks
Use
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Press "Enter" for line breaks
Select the option 'Interpret typed HTML' in the Compose mode category.
Then write the post title and publish it. That's how I did it. See if you can do it.
;) Thanks
Wow, thanks so much for letting me know! I'll try it out! :D You're welcome!
DeleteI don't see it. It looks like it disappeared
ReplyDeleteOh! Sorry, it's there right now.
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